Remember how I've told you about the three sisters and their three prophecies? One of them already came true... so that only leaves the one saying I will become king! How will this come about! I've told my wife about it, and she was thrilled to hear this news! But the only way we could achieve such goal is by getting rid of the current king... I shall discuss this with my wife :O
We... we did it. We came up with a plan for me to achieve the throne! My wife and I have decided to murder Duncan, the current king. There's no way people will think of me, Macbeth, Thane of Cawdor, as the murderer! Why, people will merely blame a servant or such! ITS. TIME. FOR. ME. TO. BE. KING.
Good job. I like how it seems like you're writing in your diary and that it seems like you're talking to someone ("Remember how I've told you...") In between your two paragraphs, perhaps add transitional words like "Later on in the day..."
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